Well; I met up with my Dissertation tutor Tamara yesterday and I have had a lot of feedback from her about my Draft. She said that I have created a solid first Draft of my project but just needs changing slightly to make it read better and my research to come through a lot clearly.
Also she pointed out that instead of the inclusion of Individualism within the Third chapter could be tied in with Post Modernism which until now avoided me but I think that It would be a worthy inclusion within my Project, which brings one good question. Instead of being a social system of sorts, Post Modernism is more of course the events post the popularity of Modernism which in turn means Modern Thought, so to include this within my project would give it a slight twist in my opinion.
The final deadline for this project is within the next five weeks; so the final thing will be finished within the next three weeks; so keep here for updates of how the second and final drafts are coming.
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Wednesday, 3 February 2010
Tuesday, 6 October 2009
Stardust Speedway 034 - Dissertation Meeting Feedback and Wave 2 Incoming
Well; this morning was the first Dissertation meeting this morning with my Dissertation tutor, Tamara and overall everything went well.
I showed her my current version of my research plan, which is at Version 1.1 and she liked the look of it so far; but needs a bit of re-arranging about and further research like looking at more broader topics within the gaming and real world. She also suggested looking at more Journals as well.
So from this post onward; the first wave of research has been completed and I am going to move onto Wave 2.
I have had a few ideas on the way home from Uni this afternoon ranging from sub-researching Communism to provide a contrast the capitalism which would include looking at further figureheads such as Karl Marx and his inclusion of the Communist Manifesto and looking at gaming journals such as The Gamer's Quarter (Where is Issue 9?) to look at the culture of videogames as well.
So here we go again and prepare for a large change to the blog and lets see where we go within the Research world this time
I showed her my current version of my research plan, which is at Version 1.1 and she liked the look of it so far; but needs a bit of re-arranging about and further research like looking at more broader topics within the gaming and real world. She also suggested looking at more Journals as well.
So from this post onward; the first wave of research has been completed and I am going to move onto Wave 2.
I have had a few ideas on the way home from Uni this afternoon ranging from sub-researching Communism to provide a contrast the capitalism which would include looking at further figureheads such as Karl Marx and his inclusion of the Communist Manifesto and looking at gaming journals such as The Gamer's Quarter (Where is Issue 9?) to look at the culture of videogames as well.
So here we go again and prepare for a large change to the blog and lets see where we go within the Research world this time
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